Today in class we had to peer review our classmates second essay of the semester using Global Peer Review edits. I had to peer review a friend’s essay. I believe that my best comments were the ones that helped her go more in-depth into her essay. Many of us, including myself, usually only write on the top layer of our papers, never going in deeper and more in-depth. If everyone in the class tried to be more in-depth all of your writing would be much better. I believe by reminding my friend to go more in-depth will help her produce a great essay!